Reviews for Affinity Uncertain
Taija chapter 9 . 8/22/2002

I'm hap hap happy(yeah I know ::Whistles::...stop making funny faces at me) got in the next chapter a few gramatical errors but on the whole alright, I like. I'm getting two different vibes from the Brad and Eric relationship one is like everyone else that they were once an item and it ended badly the other is well, maybe there related like cousin's or half-brother's or something like that cos earlier you mentioned how they had a lot of the same habits/characteristics ohwell just a thought also I can see Ian's dark secret is being he's connected to this illusive "head" maybe it's his family (which he he seems to dispise so much)or a family friend like his father is a mob boss or something that would deffinatly mean he could protect allen if things got gritty. ::shrugs:: either write more chapters please so I can stop guessing it's driven me up the wall.

Firebird chapter 9 . 8/13/2002
Yay! Another chapter...though it did take quite a while. Hopefully the next one won't take so long *gives great big puppy dog eyes* Alright enough begging. This was an interesting chapter; quite different from the ones before it. Who would've thought all that would go on in high school. I personally think Nick knows a lot more about, well, basically everything. Are we gonna see more on him? I know he's not really one of the main characters but I just get this sense that there's something more to him but no one's picking up on it. As for Ian's dark secret...I really have no clue. Supposedly he'll be able to protect Allen which means that he's had dealings with this kind of trouble before...maybe his dealings were what got his sister killed (or did we already get a reason for that, I can't remember)? Plus if he can protect Allen, well, I would think he'd have some allies. Maybe. Not sure on that one. Ok and now for Brad and Eric. I always thought since the begining that they had dated before Allen go tto the school. I mean that seems a logical explanation. Then perhaps it was there social status's that ripped them apart. I've seen that happen a lot in high school. Where two people like each other but the one with the higher social status calls it quites so that he can maintain his popularity...of course it seems like Eric's friends are liking Brad now so it wouldn't really damage his position anymore...which could open up a spot for a confontation? Hmmm. That would be interesting. Ahhhh! Must have more. Please?
Warui Warui Neko chapter 9 . 8/11/2002
Yay! You continued! Finally! lol *sniffles* I thought you would never get the next chapter up! :P

Hmm...for some reason I'm thinkin' that Brad and Eric used to be 'together' but Eric wouldn't 'come out' becuz he wanted to save his reputation so Brad got mad at him and broke it off or somin... O.O Whos knows! Argh... I'm probably wrong. .
Firebird chapter 8 . 7/19/2002
I get back from vacation and find a new chapter waiting. Yeah! *sigh* But things are getting even more complicated and I sstill have so much to learn about all the characters. Ian, as the title says, is still quite teh mystery. I mean getting pissed about the man at the door I understand but the whole histroy behind it is still rather unclear. However it's mostly how his emotions around Allen seem to switch so quickly that throws me off. On the other hand he did want him to be a model so I bet that's going to come up later in the story. It should be an interesting scene. But then there's still the rest of the group and how they're going to factor in on everything...and how they'll get revenge for that rats and all. Though I don't think it was exactly necessary to check the cameras since he did see some of the ones snorting cocaine. But I guess if they want to know specifically who int he group put them in his locker then that would be the best way. So much to look forward to. I can't wait for the next chapter! And it's vacation so hopefully you'll have more time to write and will be able to post the next couple of chapters fairly quickly :)
SolenCrosswell chapter 8 . 6/2/2002
Okay! I've dinally reveiwed! Sorry it took me so long. This is really really good! I like it... It's different fomr just stories, you know? Hah ahha.. Ilike Eric's personality... I can picture him very well, but I really do adore Ian... He's great! Keep it up please!
Stina2 chapter 8 . 5/19/2002
ooh scary! hehe glad you put up another chapter..yay! keep writing..i'm enjoying this story a lot! :)
Warui Warui Neko chapter 8 . 5/19/2002
Dun dun *dramtic pause* DUN! _ yay! You're still alive... erm I mean... You got another chapter up! (lol) Yippie! Please continue soon! Ple~ase? _~
AJ chapter 7 . 5/18/2002
I like this story, lol It's very good, so much going on, keep writting!
Shoujo Kitsune chapter 7 . 5/13/2002 must write more!
grandmagoodwitch chapter 7 . 5/13/2002
a ******* great story! keep on writing.
annonymous chapter 7 . 4/26/2002
Please please write faster? I really like the "compromising" positions that Allen ends up with the two guys. _ I hope there is yet more.

_~ Eventually, you know, you'll have to do a lemon. But we'll just see who it turns up to be with. If you've seen Hana Yori Dango, this kind of reminds me of some of the characters in there.

But I *do* love Allen's cutely innocence, though, that is the main reason he gets into such situations.
Stina2 chapter 7 . 4/26/2002
yay! I'm still lovin the story and I want more! hehe ..good chapter :)
Warui Warui Neko chapter 7 . 4/25/2002
Yay!yay!yay!yay!yay! *jumps up and down* _ Another chapter! Sheez it usually takes me *for~ev~er* to get one up but here you gone and gotten three chapters up in less than a month! *sniff* just the thought of it brings tears to my eyes! *wails* Oh! *sob* this is just so BEAUTIFUL *sob*... *sniff* anybody got a box of Klenex?

_ All better now! Please continue soon... Oooh now i gotta go add you too my fav. authors list! WAHAH!
Firebird chapter 7 . 4/25/2002
A new chapter! Well I'd have to say that Allen is def. leaning towards Ian. But he thinks he'll solve his problems with a girlfriend? *sigh* How typical (not of you but of...well him). If he tries to go through with it then there will be a lot of tension in that group (not that there isn't already). Anyhoo, the last part of this chapter was intriguing. It seems Ian, like Allen, can't (or won't) admit his feelings. As for Eric well, I'm not sure what to say that I haven't said. He does seem to be very caring in this chapter but it's obviously not getting him anywhere. I realize that Allen will most likey end up with Ian not Eric but...I wish that he would at least learn to understand Eric a little more and create a better friendship with him. Oh and Brad needs to be included more. Hmmm. Well I can't wait to figure otu the problem between Brad and Eric...hopefully they'll resolve their differences. Ok, enugh of my babbling. Time to do hw. Bluck. Post the next chapter soon please!
GreenMachine chapter 6 . 4/23/2002
Uh...this is like really good and stuff but...If I'm way off base, I apologise, but aren't there already a few stories out there on this website w/ nearly the same set up, that were submitted BEFORE this one. Even though some of the stuff is a little different, the personalities to those other stories along with the whole journal entry idea with m/m themes going on, seem very familiar. If i'm wrong, I'm sorry. But, your story is really good!
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