Reviews for Egypt: Reliving the Past
MadamWriterGal chapter 29 . 11/1/2010
I really love this story. I think that it would make a great manga series or anime. There are only a few things I would change. I think that Chloe, Mandi, and Ami should have had a bigger role in the story. I understand that you were juggling a lot of characters, but I think that they should have had more to do with the plot; especially the prophesy. Also, I think that some of the character's back stories could have been elaborated on more. I wanted to know more about Sekat, Marton, Yakumi, and Keshsat. I also wanted to know more about Sasaki's past, Eric's future, and about Rei's present: how she got to be in that state, and how she is related to Takmet.

I really love the characterization that went into the story and the relationship between Takmet and Chloe. I kind of wish there could have been more relationships as strong as their love for each other was. If you ever do a rewrite of this story, I would love to see more of a relationship between Chloe and her hookup (I won't give it away who her hookup is for the people who are still reading). I also wanted to see more of Seti's character because he was interesting and I didn't feel that he got enough show time.

All that being said, I think that the story was very entertaining to read and very creative. I could really see this being an animated television series or comic! I hope that it becomes one or the other or both in the future!
serpentlord123 chapter 6 . 7/17/2010
I like this.

I'd just like to point out that it was Ancient Egyptian custom that the pharaoh and other high ranking figures to have shaved heads.
MistahFiction chapter 29 . 6/4/2010
i loved the story, good job writing it! )
Dalilt chapter 29 . 10/26/2009
You did a good job. This is a pretty nice story :) I don't have much to had only that I would have liked to see more interaction between Sasaki, her mother and Seti :D Other than that I give it a really big aproving smile «. Keep going
Closed Account Sorry Pal chapter 3 . 3/24/2009
This story is just getting good keep up good stories like this.
ChristianAngel01 chapter 29 . 3/9/2009
Whoa that was one of the most amazing stories I have ever read since I come on fictionpress and you can look on my page that I read alot of stories but yours are in the top 10 of my favorites in my book. Give yourself a pat on the back. Keep up the awesome work :D
atreyu love chapter 4 . 2/18/2007
sweet :D
N.S. Blanchard chapter 8 . 6/13/2005
i read this about one or two years ago. seeing as i am addicted to egypt its the perfect fic for me. :D wonderful job.
Underestimated chapter 29 . 4/29/2005
I loved your story. It was fresh and well written with orginal characters and an awesome twist on mythology! Keep the awsome work up!
bellsandy chapter 1 . 10/4/2004
Yu-gi-oh had absolutely nothing to do with this story. ; Interesting thought though. I started writing this story almost 6 years ago, and I think finished it around 3 years ago. I looked at some Yu-gi-Oh release dates for the US and couldn't find anything earlier than 2002_ Funny how good ideas(ie: Egypt) seem to pop up one after the other. I think I even started it before the new Mummy movie came out, but I was definitely writing it during. I was very miffed though when the second movie came out and the concept of past lives was similar to my own(like I said, people seem to think of the same good ideas at the same time, regardless)._;;
Grace Barton chapter 29 . 10/4/2004
Hey, what's wrong with that? We don't know what linhgo the Egyptians used. Besides, this is Bellsandy's story and a personal touch has been added. I'm an anime lover too, so go! I'm guessing Yu-Gi-Oh! had something to do with this fic, but I may be wrong. But I like what I've read so far!
bellsandy chapter 29 . 6/14/2004
Ya know, sneeze...this is a story. And it's fictional. And the Egyptians don't speak English. They're only hearing English. Some sort of magic is translating it for them. I don't know if Sasaki is doing it unintentionally, but they're definitely not "speaking" English. I admit Sasaki is a little Mary-Sueish in the beginning-I had to start somewhere. But I've been told it gets better_;
sneeze chapter 4 . 5/18/2004
what the f* is going on with this story? If you found yourself in ancient egypt you wouldn't be so f*ing calm. And what's with the egyptians speaking perfect english and saying s* like "no more mister nice guy"? your main character is SO mary sue it is almost painful! Yuck!
Guest chapter 29 . 12/30/2003
i am quite surprised
i thought that you would of had like...
10 reviewz
cuz this ficcie is EXCELLENT!
o yah
pleaz try 2 update ur website
that's where i first read/found about this story
goddessofmoondreams chapter 29 . 12/23/2003
This story is amazing. I've always been obssesed with ancient Egypt, and though I'm not really into the whole romance thing the love story was great. Wonderful job! :)
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