|Reviews for Bria|
| Lellida chapter 1 . 7/13/2006
Ooh, I love this! It was so well written, with lots of detailing and imagery. I saw a couple typos here and there, so you might want to edit it again. Still, a really emotional piece. You conveyed the idea well.
| B. Fisher chapter 1 . 1/30/2002
This is really good. Maybe you should think of moving it over to the Original Myth category though, so that you get some better or more on target criticism.
Thanks for sharing your work! Please R&R some of my work (or all of it..lol) if you get the chance. I would love to hear what you think.