| Reviews for Lobster |
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   smilez4ever chapter 1 . 4/9/2005 lol. That was funny . And anievell, it is fine . the first line has 5 syllables. The second has seven and the last has 5 again. that's the way a haiku is supposed to be. Anyway! I loved it! It was so funny . |
| Dylan Wiles chapter 1 . 12/31/2003 Yes! |
| blacklives4ever chapter 1 . 12/28/2003 Hehe this is funny |
| Elrohir the Writer chapter 1 . 3/10/2003 How true this is |
| Bobcat Moran chapter 1 . 3/5/2002 Hmm...methinks a certain reviewer needs to go back to preschool and learn how to count. Nice poem, by the way. I like how it takes a bit of a twist for the last line, giving it a subtle humor. |
| spirit walker chapter 1 . 2/2/2002 This obsession with syllables is ridiculous. You haiku is suberb. |
| The Haiku Police chapter 1 . 2/1/2002 The HKP dislike seafood but commend your use of butter. |
| Seshira chapter 1 . 1/30/2002 *confused* maine (1) Coast (2) Crust (3) a(4) cean(5)...i thought it was all right...the haiku format seems right to me. |
| anieveIII chapter 1 . 1/30/2002 Maine Coast Crust-a-cean is six syllables, this is not haiku form. |