Very pretty! Please write more.

Awww! How sweet! 'But snowflakes fall like bursts of light,' that was fantastic! Another great poem! :O)

this is good..but it kinda left me hanging ) i would just add another stanza..like a really powerful one and go with it!

good, very good, your very deep

I think this poem helps to evoke a sense of hope following 9/11... perhaps a title like "Shadows Fail" or perhaps something simple (to suit your style of writing-I truly admire your simple spare style) like "Hope"? The light imagery is beautifully inspiring.

Nice hopeful tone...

I like the image of snowflakes falling 'like bursts of light.' Very poetic and impressive how you made it rhyme naturally (meaning it doesn't sound forced). Good job! _

~EG

Hey Lilers!

I've decided on your present! You're going to get another review for each of your works from me!

I'm going to try and read ALL of your works again, though probably I won't manage it today. This poem is wonderful, I love it! I really like the line 'But snowflakes fall like bursts of light' because I can just imagine the flashes of white agains the black of darkness.

Great poem, but now I must be going onto the next! Ta ta!

The only thing I can come up with for a poem is "Last Whisp of Darkness," but I personally think that's a bad title. Especially for a good poem :)

very beautiful! I suggest a title maybe that has something to do with a verse of this poem and have something to do with the whole poem. your right it does rhyme! oh and thanks for reviwing my story *wink*

That is such a powerful poem, Choco. I love all your description. I can see it in my mind. You have such talent. Any Language Arts teacher would die to have a student like you.

Hi, this was great! It was a bit sad though, sort of. I'm off to read and review the others!

looooove it! Wonderful!

Claps and smiles, very nice Lily...

That was short and sweet.

christ, lils! I've still got tears in my eyes! how can you say that sucks? it's amazing! stupendous! very, very professional! you're an amazing writer. such an awesome, awe-inspiring, inspirational, superb writer. The words are so gorgeously shaped to a sad visual... it's effective, lils. I love it. ~Xavi