Reviews for Autumn Poem
Aleah Rayne chapter 1 . 7/2/2006
This is really a good poem. Loved the vivid descriptions.
Killua chan chapter 1 . 11/3/2003
so good! O_O;; wow...
Hana chapter 1 . 9/18/2003
A really great poem. Glad I stumbled over this one. I just love how you describe the scene. Anyway great work!
storyfish chapter 1 . 7/2/2001
Absolutely beautiful poem! I love the autumn hunter imagery. I've seen so much teenage angst poetry (not that teenage angst is a BAD thing...) on the FFN that it's a rare and happy surprise to read a poem that's not!
Angelique chapter 1 . 6/21/2001
I love the way you use words! Especcially in the end, you could almost feel the way the seasons do. I thought it was spectactular.
Bria chapter 1 . 6/13/2001
Beatiful! I love poetry, and weather is a great topic to explore with it. :) ~*~Bria
Athenas Beauty chapter 1 . 5/1/2001
a wonderful work of art, many details that usually escape the regular writer. very nice.
Tigger1 chapter 1 . 1/31/2001
very good!
the net slayerette chapter 1 . 1/4/2001
I like the last lines best.
Sandiya chapter 1 . 9/13/2000
Stalk, descreet, unsheathed...words that just tell the story. It didn't rhyme, but most poems don't _;; Often it's too bothersome. Well, simply terrific. .
Dendera chapter 1 . 8/14/2000
Lovely ;) It sounds like something I'd write- I love Autumn. Beautiful, poignant use of words.
A. Ushio chapter 1 . 8/14/2000
Pleasantly technical, but a little disconcertingly random.