Reviews for Wartorn
K. Kofsuske chapter 1 . 12/17/2001
*sniffles* Ke-l-ly! That's sad, but very very good
Tarasque chapter 1 . 11/9/2001
A beautifully written, emotional poem. Imagine how many times this might have really happened...it almost made me cry (It probably did for most people) Beautiful poem.
Gyrus chapter 1 . 10/30/2001
The physical details are very vivid. I would like to see more of the emotions of the people involved, especially the woman.
ChrstnWrtr chapter 1 . 11/20/2000
I like that poem. It's better than any poem I've ever written.
Sandiya chapter 1 . 9/13/2000
*tries not to cry* Ummm...I got a clear vision of this piece, and it was saddening, how war tears up everything and anything in its path. Excellent work...I'm glad I got to read it ;_;
Dendera chapter 1 . 8/14/2000
*sniffles* It shouldn't stop at just a poem, I want to know what happened! Fantastic work. You're very gifted if you can take and describe one moment in time effectively, without having to give a load of background information.