This is not a Haiku!

Very nice job! Except...this isn't the pattern of a Haiku-if I'm not mistaken it's the first line is five syllables, the second seven syllables, and the last five syllables. Or, perhaps you knew that...if you did I appologize or maybe the spacing got wrong when you uploaded. Anyhow, other than that I thought it was a beautiful piece of work! Just to inform you it's flicker. . Again wonderful piece. Keep Writing! -Celtica