| Reviews for Dear Brother |
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  Julianxerxes chapter 1 . 3/24/2016 Very well done.I like the story from beginning to end. It's so emotional and touching. Kudos. |
 sunny-california chapter 1 . 7/30/2012 you should totally update. this looks like the makings of a really good story! |
| kittykatpeterson chapter 1 . 2/7/2012 GAH! more more more! Wel not more... unless your gonna bring him back to life XD but that would suck for him :/ poor kid /: If you do decide to save him I'd love to read what happens. |
| IndigoNightandRayneStorm chapter 1 . 5/2/2007 Aw! So sad! Beautifully written though, excellent story! |
| firestar267 chapter 1 . 2/22/2007 Oh thsi is sad...sad...but amazing. You wrote it really well, introduced us to it and ended it very well. The emotions you captured were done very well...well done! |
| RaiRai118 chapter 1 . 10/7/2006 That was one kick-ass story!The emotions and everything were great!And I loved the ending!Awesome,just awesome. |
| Jsquared chapter 1 . 7/3/2006 i...i...that was awesome! i loved it! please write more! |
| Quinn Anderson chapter 1 . 6/27/2006 Just...wow. Amazing emotions and a wonderful piece. |
| VirgilKane ismyname chapter 1 . 3/5/2006 Nice. Eerie & brilliant. |
| darkdemonsunday chapter 1 . 2/14/2006 This was awesome. It was a little creepy, though, but only because I have a good friend named Neil so when I read this, all I could think of was him... so it was a little weird. Otherwise, this was awesome, as I said. :standing ovation: |
| Bob Rhynoplasty chapter 1 . 1/9/2006 hey, wow. thats so sad! why'd you kill his family? like the kid didn't have enough on hos plate being molested and all. i wish u didnt kill the little sister, but hey, its ur story. which was very good by the way. i almost cried. |
| la-vita-bella chapter 1 . 11/16/2005 Oh my gosh, that was great. Incest was amazing. And how you brought us into the story was great. You explained everything. And how we learn what happened throuhg Brian's "flashback" was ingenious. I loved it. My favorite part was probably the end. Just those two last paragraphs. "'Hello, Neil.' Darkness." Brilliant. Absolutely brilliant. I could picture your story in my head. Even the suicide part. I swear, I clutched my own wrists at that part (which proves this is good writing. xD)! Great, great job. No critisism! Amazing. Love, Moi |
| Qew99 chapter 1 . 11/9/2005 Oh my god. That was really beautiful and sad. |
| Michael Murasaki chapter 1 . 6/18/2005 Whoa! For icky-incest, that was pretty good! Congrats! You might even have brought me over to the DARKER side of writing... 10-Q! |
| I-Luv-Mosquiton chapter 1 . 5/25/2005 kickass story! I loved reading this- great job! |