Dark and sad, but good. I think that you handled a difficult topic tastefully.

woa, that was really good. simply stunningly wonderful.

SP

I like it alot i have a strange obsession with incest...i am soo sick!

Giggle. AfterLife

I really like the way you are writing the story. But you CAN'T stop there! PLEASE UPDATE as soon as you get a chance!D What's goin happen next? I wonder...(o_O)
Signed, Sweet n' Yummy

that was beyond words...simply perfect.

The ending sent chills down my spine. Good job.
Dill

O.O I'm going to feel that emotion all night. This is a remarkable piece of writting. Brilliant.

whoa- angst at its pinnacle- very heart-wrenching. the ending was especially good.

whoa... nice writing, the ending was the best.

that was amazing. i can't describe how i feel but i cant understand what makes people feel so useless because of that even though it's supposedly quite rare. that was really well written.

Cali.

plz could you r&r my fic [on an account called imation] if you have time?

thanks!

Wow... uh... keep writing

Oh wow, very intense, and incredibly done.

~ just alex

Wow... this is so powerful, so well written, so sad.

oh my god... how... i don't know a word to describe the feelings i had when i read this... omg omg omg... okay, enough shocked muttering, keep up the good work! i loved it!

[low whistle]

whoa. That was ... simply amazing. You write like, God, like I've not seen in a long time.

This story was so beautiful and sad. The ending was perfect. Everything was ... incredible.

Wow.

The story is provacative, heart-wrenching, and [for me] hits close to home with the suicide thing. It's everything a story, short or long, should be.

Really, you need to do more things like this. would be better for it, ne?