good chapter, update soon!

A little cheesey ... but good, overall.

Ah this chapter soo lived up to my expectations and soo soo much more. it truely made my day... and weekend. yes im a dork but it was still a really good chappie. i like the character developments, and where they are going. a part of me wanted to be like scott just say i love you too and happiness, but that wouldnt be a very scott thing to do. what he id dfit him perfectly, and i really liked his exit and that last bit. i can see why this would take you so long to write, but you came through with flying colors and then some. i really liked the last two sentences "I'm not alright. But... I'm getting there." it really ended the chapter nicely. i am still excited about seeing where the story will head next, and i still have so many bbubbling questions about victoria and so much more. cant wait for the next chappie. stay safe!

hi! This chapter is really awesome! I wonder what's gonna happen next...

I loved the ending to that -

o good! i want to see the next chapter now!

Yeah, you updated!I'm so glad. I really liked this chapter, even though I feel so sorry for Toriko. This chapter makes her seem so human...so like all of us, even more so than embarrassing moments or even falling for Scott. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter! Please update soon!

I'm too exited to know what's gonna happen and it's been a long time since it was getting to a realy really good part -

I hope you please continue the story as soon as you can -

omg, i hope Toriko will be okay. Most importantly I hope Scott doesn't make it work and she doesn't end up dying. I'm getting extremely curious as to where this is all going. ~*Arika Morance*~

must say that that was an amazing chapter. it was well worth the wait. the constant meddeling of friends yet with the feeling of still being alone. yes i think we have all felt that in our lives, or at least i have. i love how your character really do seem like actual people, your character development in wonderful... especially Toriko. i loved her reaction to the new info about what victoria wants to do. it relaly fit, and it was really creative about Scott being added in there at the end. of course once again it leaves us on a cliff hanger... sigh. this chappie was well worth the wait. cant wait for the next one! i know it will be just as good. stay safe and happy new years!

hurry hurry! i wanna read the next chapter

Wow. Really good chapter. I'm actually a bit surprised that you had Toriko break down. I didn't expect it but it was well done. The way you described Toriko's mental and emotional state is outstanding.

I really liked this chapter and great title too!

(**insert begging for another chapter soon while fully noting that you are doing your best**)

Eh heh. Poor Toriko. I had a hunch she was going to be catching it from all sides.

Good chapter. Please update soon.

hey nice new chappie... ok a month old but its nice to know you are still out there! lol loved the chappie, it kind of left me on edge... but most of your chappies do. love this fic though i cant wait for the next chappie. i know its going to be great. lata days. stay safe

WowThat's all I can say about this story right now.I love all your characters, the fact that you have the ability to invoke emotions in not just the character, but the audience. I've noticed that some of the best stories I've read can provoke the reader to empathize with the character, feel embarrassment when the character's in a tricky situation, or feel giddy when something good happened to them, and your story has that ability. I'm really looking forward to your next update!