Hum. A very good chapter. I find myself lost at one point though. Was Toriko projecting her thoughts or has Scott developed the ability to read thoughts as well?

The only thing I really don't think fits that well is the title of this chapter and I've been trying to come up with a reason for why that is. "Trust Me" ... I don't know. I think it might be because the "me" refers to a character speaking. Do you know what I mean? And no this isn't the first chapter title you have like this. However, if I look through the list, the one's I feel are catchy and creative don't include "I" or "Me" etc. "The Scars of Scott Arenson," "Battle Lines," "The Invader" are all wonderful titles. I just don't think "Trust Me" is a strong enough title for such a good chapter.

What a silly thing for me to pick at. I'm sorry.

...wow, that's scary... I'd be scared shitless to have a dead person living in my body and mind. That's just freaky. Especially someone with such a twisted mind. She's so mean! Well, can't wait for the next chapter!~*ArikaMorance*~

I love your story, you are clearly a dedicated author. I notice you tend to use his/her he/she incorrectly at times, putting he instead of she or her instead of his.

i'm suspended!... i'm still in suspense!... X3... write some more SOON!... XD...

thats soo sad... i feel so bad for Sakaki... and Sandra, damn. I at first felt sorry for her thinking she was cute and just her mom was evil... but she is truly the devil in this chappie... she scares me. *cowers under blanket*

im curious at what her ability was/is... and it sounds like Toriko is kind of like Victoria in that she will be able to erase memories... a lil scary, but knowing Toriko she would never do it on purpose unlike the "canto" (which i still have no no no idea what word that could be, its gonna botha me all day i can tell, lol)

i feel soo so so sad about Sakaki, i hope everything works out for her, i dont want her to die soo depresed and in dispair and stuff. *grabs tissues* soo sad... well i soo cant wait for the next chappie, excited that this one came out soo quickly _ till then stay safe! lata kiddo

yes still alive... havent been on this thing in forever, but im so glad i caught up with everything story wise... and it has gotten so soo soo soo good, and yet i am soo on edge at how everything was left. What im on edge about:

-i want to know what Victoria is planning-if Yuasuna will be asked out by the other guy (& will she say yes)-if Kanako is going to be ok (& Akari for the matter)-whats up with Sandra (& if shes crazy or not)-if we can truly trust Takigi-what memories Scott lost-and finally if Scott and Toriko and all their problems (both btw & not btw them) will ever get solved.

ahh, but i am soo happy you are keeping up with this story, it is truly incredible. you should really think of maybe getting it published or perhaps even getting an artist and actaully making it into a manga, i know i would buy it for sure! well newho i so cannot wait for the next chappie, and i thank you for resparking my whole inspiration and love for writing and reading on here. lata kiddo, and stay safe

o... wow... that really sux what just happened there. I'm really feeling sorry for her now. *sigh* hope you continue this soon. ~*ArikaMorance*~

aw... it'z great!... kip it up...

a big horray for... luv to read more... XD... gambatte ne!... X3...

YAY! New chapter. Very freaky new chapter, but I like freaky things. W00t!

Still ... on a side note, the title of the chapter kind of gave that whole sequence away.

Very good. Now hurry with the next one!

Ah! Kawaiso Toriko-chan! (excuse misspelling, I think you know what I mean, ne?)Wow...Scott's philosophy is REALLY profound...and explains a LOT about his character! No WONDER he's so cynical, if he has such a disillusioned worldview! I really hope Toriko-chan DOES get another chance with Scott...what a time for her powers to kick in! ~_~* Poor girl! This just REALLY isn't her week...first the cramps and her cycle...then almost getting beat up...and now this! Well...at least there's a kind of limit to how bad things can get...she's just got to hit bottom, and then everything will get better! *_* Ne?

ouch... what an ending, YOU MUST CONTINUE! in less that 2 months

hey.. whats up you havn't posted in forever and you said it was halfway done.. comeon i really want to read this!

HEY! WE COULD USE AN UPDATE HERE!

No pressure. Great story, btw.

Da-hamn. This is good. Yah. I haven't read a good story about psychics since X-men completely destroyed their good name.

BUT ...

BAD SELD - um ... I mean, ARCHIMAGE! BAD ARCHIMAGE, BAD! YE MUST BE PUNISHED! PUNISHED, I SAY!

WHY, you ask? WHY should I tell you? Ah, yes, civil liberties. Damn. Because you're late, that's why! NOW ye shall be IMPRISONED!

Hey! I'm new here, and I want to say that this is one of my favorite stories in this section. One question, though: the description for Takigi says that his hair was "Black with grey patches". Could there be a connection between this and Victoria's newly-revealed psychic power (and side effect)?

Well, that's about all. You're doing a great job with this story, keep it up! Update soon, OK?