|Reviews for All For One|
| Rob Roy '03 chapter 1 . 8/25/2004
Interesting, she tells him what he wants to hear, then turns up the Death card and doesn't tell him...
The Death card actually means change, so wouldn't he have been pleased to know that?
Other than that little niggle, this is very well written.
| indi go duck y chapter 1 . 10/10/2002
very well-written, especially for a challenge, though an inch cliche toward the end. nice job, though. it made me wish you had developed it.
| FFF1 chapter 2 . 3/20/2002
I loved that. It was amazing - and in response to a challenge as well!
| Heidi chapter 1 . 3/15/2002
This is wierde? So the boy is goin to die?
| Shadowgirl chapter 1 . 2/9/2002
Interesting way to approach a challenge, but nonetheless it's well written and is interesting.