Oooooo...niiiice...

*grin* Alrighty, the first little snippety is something you could write to a boy/girlfriend. It's just oh so short and sweet! _

And the second one is really pretty. I just don't know how you people can come up with these great things like 'A wilting rose cries petaled tears.' Pure genious and something I could never think of in a gazibillion years. Great job yet again, love! Cheers. Ta ta for now dawling!

Adieu mon ami until we meet again.

That's pretty cool. I like the shortness of the 1st poem, the rhymes are good too. The second "poem" or whatever it may be is really cool too...the descriptions are awesome. Good job!

-al