This was a. Awesome. Story. I read it on and off and finished it in 2 days!

This story was... AMAZING! I loved all of your quotes and the final poem, and your inspiration from a song, etc. Everything was just wonderful. :)

I admit I'm a little confused when it comes to the gang. First...they plan to kill johnny. Then they reveal he shouldn't really be in the gang in the first place. Then...they get pissed off when he decides to leave? I don't think I quite understand the logic.

Aw, this was such a sweet story. I loved it. Maybe a bit more sexual tension would have made it more exciting, but you are young afterall, so I suppose I shouldn't expect you to write too explicitly. Anyways, I really liked how you potrayed the characters. My fav character is prob Johnny. Hm, it's just he's a bit too degrading and Auora is a bit too snobby. But it was all still great. Keep up with this wonderful writing!

Great story, showed alot of time and effort, amazing you wrote this at age 12... Im going to check for a sequel...

I love this story. I enjoy it alot. Wish it wasn't R, but for the scences that happen in it, the rating fits. Hope the rest of it is as good as the beginning. _

amasing i love the whole story! tottally awesome job

good first chapter

Great story! I read it in a day!

I like Sabrina the best. She sounds just like a companion from the Valdemar books. (Not, that I'm accusing you of copying, but it's the same "I know everything and you're just a stupid human, so I can't tell you...")

That is so good! PLease write more.

Aurora cries to much ! I mean get a grap women ! I dont think she is fit to be queen if she is going to sob about everything ! ) sorry the story to so good it got me railed up !

Brillent I love the story it is great.

DM13

Yo haven read the story... as of yet, I promes that I will.

:-)

My sister looked at your web page and wanted to say that you looked like Rouge, you know? Fome X-Men (by the way that's a complimant coming form her).

I will be looking forwoad to reading your fic, manily because it looks like it acualy has deasont sized chaps in it nd it was a good summery.

P.S. I think that you are a bit crazy to put up so meny fics! You remind me of my best pal of , holy she has way to meny ideas floting in her head. But I've go off topic! I'll read and then I'll review!

Bye! Oh shut up Black Knight befor I hit you a good smak on the head. YOu may be a Knight but I am the GOddess thing here! Don't hit me! Ow! Oh you are so going to pay for that look at my hair. It's fleresont pink! I hate pink! Shit. She's gotten that dragon of her's to get me. GOt to go - you would think by naw she would know that I can kill the thing.

Wow. I have not read a story this good in a long time. I actually liked the first ending better, but the second one explained the dream they had, and I had been wondering about it. Well done.