Reviews for Drowning
Julia chapter 1 . 4/30/2002
im running out of praise! well written!
Phaere chapter 1 . 2/11/2002
Well I hope you don't really want to die. Otherwise, this is a very nice poem. I feel like that at times, too, I think everyone does. Good poem, write more. -Shazirah
RealmLost chapter 1 . 2/11/2002
I'm not about to completely flame you, because it was good, but I would have used a few different word choices in some spots... Good work, nonetheless.
Kijlakduzy T. G. Azlig chapter 1 . 2/11/2002
Ohhhh! cool! I like it! Really well written, gives a sense of mystery and hopelessness.
kita chapter 1 . 2/11/2002
deep man, real deep.