Reviews for The Artist's Tale
Kae Ti chapter 14 . 8/1/2002
Mrf *winces* Poor Alesso. And poor Gabriel! How long has this part been up? It still says "Part 13 just posted" on your summary XP xxx
blueleopard87 chapter 14 . 7/31/2002
NOOOOO! poor alesso! ;_; i was crying while i read the last 3 chapters! and what about poor gabriel? please write more soon! ;_;
SoNiC1 chapter 2 . 7/26/2002
Wow that was sooooooo coooool!

It felt like I was really there when Alesso looked at Raîmons rough sketch.

Your writing is your art _

Must read chapter 3 [Reading at 12 35 am]

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SoNiC1 chapter 1 . 7/26/2002
Your writing is very good _ nice and clean, or in other words it dosn't look like its been in the blender (unlike mine). Also so far so good and I'm looking foward to reading chapter two...its onlt a click away (thankgoodness!)

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Giggles0913 chapter 13 . 7/25/2002
hey! ur story is great! i love it! if u could come read my stories & give me pointers on them, that would be great! see ya & keep the good work!

~Tara~
Kae Ti chapter 13 . 7/25/2002
;_;! That was awful. You should be shot for writing that. That parting scene was, like, gut-wrenchingly sad (or maybe I'm just getting too emotionally involved _~). I see Alesso as dark now, strangely - he looks younger than he did when I imagined him as blond. A bit like Atreyu, in fact. And get you, where have all these reviews flown in from? You got another two just while I was reading the last few chapters! Well anyway, fantastic stuff as usual. I have a strong feeling I'm going to hate you quite a bit if you put poor Raímon and Alesso through much more. It's just so sad... *sniffles*
CorianderEisenhower chapter 13 . 7/24/2002
Now I'm really feeling bad for Alesso! This is seeming more and more Anne Rice-like as it goes on. The style is yours, not hers, but it reminds me of Anne Rice all the same. You're characterizing Alesso really well, although I don't always like the language you have him use-it sounds a little too educated. Can't wait to see what's up with this Gabriel guy.
CorianderEisenhower chapter 12 . 7/24/2002
Wow. I can't help but feel so sorry for these people. Give them happiness! Give them love! Please, don't let them avoid each other anymore! *crying*
Warui Warui Neko chapter 12 . 7/24/2002
Oh my... *sniffle* I think I'm going to cry! Nooo! please continue soon so I won't be depressed for too long! Wait... Oh no! Thats not the end is it? No! *goes and checks summary* ok... so your gonna continue right! Like soon? Please _

Warui Warui Neko
CorianderEisenhower chapter 10 . 7/23/2002
Corey of the sieve-mind forgot to tell you-you have an Anne Rice-ly style that also makes me want to reccomend this. Nice, thick description. Also forgot to tell you that Ababwh is a very unusual name for a Spanish city-is it a real name?
CorianderEisenhower chapter 11 . 7/23/2002
Well! This is an interesting story, GREAT style of writing. Love all of the characters. You make them loveable and loathsome in the same breath, and the love always comes out on top. Nice grasp of the time period, too. I'm impressed. Very impressed. I think I'll go reccomend this to a friend suffering a conflict of church and sexuality.
katie chapter 4 . 7/21/2002
is that a true story? it sounds like it, you gave it so much detail and confidence.

i'm 12, but i feel the same way about Father Time and all. my mother's an artist too. if u really are one, that is. because i really can't tell! u sound like u know everything about art.

meaning, namely, i think it's great. it's beautiful. i'm one of those people who can visualize what their reading. i luv reading and writing. this story, i could really see. i could see everything u described really clearly.

3 words: GET... IT... PUBLISHED!
Warui Warui Neko chapter 8 . 6/13/2002
Wow! This is one of the best stories I have read in a long time! It is hard to find the really good ones sometimes, especially when they don't get enough credit. I was directed to your story by recomendation (bah I sound like a 40 year-old person... lol) and when I first started reading it I wasn't really gonna continue but then it kinda just caught my attention, and I couldn't stop _ I was a bit surprised at first when it said you only had 12 reviews (this will be no. 13... such a lucky no. too! :p) because I wrote a pretty much PWP fic as a novel (wit slash/yaoi!) and got like 40 or so reviews when yours is obviously *much* better than mine! _~ So just a bit of advice~ If you really want more reviews you might try puttin "contains slash" in the summary, because to be truthful I almost didn't read it thinking that it wasn't going to be one (me being the slash adict that I am... eh heh). So anyways I really love this and now I gotta go see if there is any room for you in my favorite authors list! Wahah!

Please continue soon! I would really like to read the next chapter!

Warui Warui Neko
Kae Ti chapter 8 . 4/26/2002
AWWWWWWWWW! That was so sweet _ *glomps Alesso* At last you write more! *glomps AM-chan*
San chapter 1 . 4/21/2002
I really liked this story, I mean I've never liked m/m that much, but you wrote it so well. Why don't you finish it?
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