aw that's a sad poem. You're really good at imagry. I felt I was in the room with her watching her assort things. great

Awwwwwwww. OMG (getting teary) - that is soooo sad. I really like it. I have

some stuff like this stashed away. *huggles Pippa* This is really descriptive

and the grief is clearly felt. Very good (and much better than mine!)

Pejios, the aussie loving lass from up north!

OMG! Thats beautiful! Hell this girl is talented! Wow! I'm speechless! That was great! "Until you don't come home again" *sob*! Now you've gone and made my keyboard damp with your amazing writing! Damn you and your talent! :)

Eve :-)

Awww no. :( That was so sad! But so lovely as well. You really are incredibly talented. I mean it. Cross my heart and hope to suffer a near death experience. I can't believe how good this is. The emotion you convey, despair, sadness; the language, so dark, but expressive. I am struck virtually speechless. Well worth the wait. Thank you.

Dylan

Sweet but painful. Good job.