Reviews for World
Jessica41087 chapter 1 . 5/20/2002
wow...that's all i have to say...and that it's a sad poem...but shows true feelings
Suzanne Star chapter 1 . 3/28/2002
Jeez...that's really deep. I like the way you put your problems in there, and confess that you can't have the things you'd like. Hey, you're realistic. But don't be scared to dream, sometimes that's the only thing that keeps me afloat. There might just be something (or someone) out there to live for besides death. ;)
PrettySoldierSailorNightshade chapter 1 . 3/14/2002
DOn't think you're not good enough. You will find someone somday
Poet Storm chapter 1 . 2/24/2002
wanna know a secret? there is no "simple life". everybody is screwed up. but you've got a talent a lot of people don't have, you can write, as this poem clearly shows.
Baby Rose1 chapter 1 . 2/23/2002
Wow! I like the line "I'm at the bottom" I feel that way a lot.

~Baby Rose~
Valerie Mackin chapter 1 . 2/15/2002
No one has a life free of worries, no matter what they say. But yes, aside from the wanting a wife, the simple life does sound damn good. This, too, is a god poem. I didn't spot any grammar mistkes this time. Don't let the world be your shephard. Be yoru own leader and live for what you want to live.