wow...that's all i have to say...and that it's a sad poem...but good...it shows true feelings

Jeez...that's really deep. I like the way you put your problems in there, and confess that you can't have the things you'd like. Hey, you're realistic. But don't be scared to dream, sometimes that's the only thing that keeps me afloat. There might just be something (or someone) out there to live for besides death. ;)

DOn't think you're not good enough. You will find someone somday

wanna know a secret? there is no "simple life". everybody is screwed up. but you've got a talent a lot of people don't have, you can write, as this poem clearly shows.

Wow! I like the line "I'm at the bottom" I feel that way a lot.

~Baby Rose~

No one has a life free of worries, no matter what they say. But yes, aside from the wanting a wife, the simple life does sound damn good. This, too, is a god poem. I didn't spot any grammar mistkes this time. Don't let the world be your shephard. Be yoru own leader and live for what you want to live.