Reviews for Neverland: Forsaken Dreamscape
effortless-inelegance chapter 7 . 11/18/2012
Well, I am definitely going to look you up! This is totally worth reading, and I love your writing style. I think there's something about Peter Pan that draws just about all of us... some kind of magic, whether that of flying, never growing up, or going two stars to the right and straight on til morning. Kudos on this, I'm totally going to look you up on wattpad!

-Grammar
effortless-inelegance chapter 4 . 11/18/2012
Arggh, I haven't had a chance to finish reading this, but my laptop battery is practically dead and I want to be able to find this story again. I shall properly review it when I have full battery. It's definitely a dark twist... but very unique. I like it. More later, this thing's about to give out on me...

-Grammar
cherrypiesizzle chapter 6 . 8/20/2012
I have to admit, as of now, Wendy annoys me with how simplistic her thinking is. I don't trust this new Peter. Well, I'm off to read the rest of the story!
Jiaqui chapter 32 . 12/15/2011
I must say, that was amazing! At the beginning I just wanted to go back and watch the Disney movie, but forgot about that and became absorbed in your story. The surprise that 'Nibs' was really Peter shocked me, hehheh. Poor Nibs...he was my favorite for a while. Slightly was my favorite in the end, though. Fitting death for Tinker Bell, letting Wendy do something seemingly against her sweet nature because she was just that angry, and rightfully so.

Again, amazing! On to go read another of your stories. . Thank you!
crunchyx33 chapter 32 . 12/7/2011
I really like how this story went. I'm glad it wasn't as predictable as I thought it would be :L
ryse chapter 32 . 10/21/2011
Original - which is interesting for a story that is technically a piece of fanfiction.

I had initially read this story with the intention of just finding a story that had some Peter Pan in it, and thus I found this.

What can I say?

It was so good that it seemed /so/ short despite its 100k word count.

Love it :)
loser-by-choice chapter 32 . 9/22/2011
Wonderful, wonderful story. So many twists and turns, I couldn't stop reading it. Beautiful work.
Geeky Punk chapter 32 . 9/12/2011
Wow! I loved it! amazing story! The beginning- dark and twisted (like) and I so did not expect Peter to be nibs, and creepy demon peter to well creepy demon. loved the tinkerbell died (always hated that bitch) your story really got me thinking about peter pan 9which is my favorite book and fairytale ( peter is hot) so thank you of reminding me of something that i really love but forgotten for a little while. :)
Nukumi chapter 32 . 9/8/2011
Unique and undeniably epic. The closest I came to ever guessing what was going on was thinking that (Nibs' body being the real Peter) the demon had taken over Peter and Peter was sharing with Nibs. But yeah, great twists! J. M. Barrie would jump out of his grave and applaud you because such sweet justice has been done here. As a lifelong fan of Peter Pan, this is seriously just about the next best thing to the original. Like, I'd honestly like to see this published. I see that this was written from 02-07 (oh my, what commitment!) so since you like dark Peter Pan sagas, I humbly suggest you check out a literary gem called The Child Thief by Brom, I strongly predict you'll love it. Thanks for a great read, ciao.
Spelllesswonder29 chapter 32 . 7/6/2011
This story was truly truly fantastic! I LOVED it! I'll confess I read MOST of it a long time ago to please a friend and didn't finish. Don't ask why cause I'm not sure. I liked it then also. It popped back into my head a couple of days ago and I HAD to finish it. I was not disappointed. I admit I was a little crestfallen when I thought that Peter had died, but I didn't five up hope. THat was very cleaver of you tho! I was so happy when he came flying down. Peter pan is by far one of my favorite children's stories closely followed by alice in wonderland. And what you've done with it is fantastic! I was never happy with how it ended, but you've done it beautifully!
Spelllesswonder29 chapter 31 . 7/6/2011
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Spelllesswonder29 chapter 30 . 7/6/2011
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Spelllesswonder29 chapter 29 . 7/6/2011
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Spelllesswonder29 chapter 28 . 7/6/2011
That last part is fantastic! I can just see his face as he is saying it to the demon! my blood is pounding from that!AWESOME!
Spelllesswonder29 chapter 27 . 7/6/2011
AWESOME!AWESOME!AWESOME!AWESOME!AWESOME!AWESOME!AWESOME!AWESOME!
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