Darling, perhaps we are too close...but, I certainly hope that this is not indicative of our realtionship. Please write me. Much Love, Bastian

Very thought-inspiring indeed. Indeedy-doo. I liked the imagery; it was appropriately gory, but haunting/beautiful at the same time. The last two lines were perfect. Great job!

~EG

Wow... I like this. Pain is beautiful... And most beauty is Painful... I like.

AFterthought: caused thought... lol Good job on this! Very deep and depressing, keep it up