Reviews for Rash words
sinister velvet chapter 1 . 3/8/2002
it doesn't necessarily has to be a bad thing, u know, it can bring relieve sometimes. I agree though, some times it's better to just keep ur mouth shut, even if it's just to treasure peace...
grey spirit chapter 1 . 2/18/2002
You did well by matching the right words with the idea you wanted to get across. The poem seems rushed, like a flow of thought, but that doesn't detract from it. I believe it does the contrary. Keep writing.
The Wandering Blue Andalite chapter 1 . 2/18/2002
This isn't what I would call odd,but creative and very good. This descirbes how I feel when I say something I don't mean to someone,and then feel bad about it afterwards,and wish that I didn't say it,and wonder why I did.