Reviews for Eyes of Stone
toolongtolive chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
This story is nice

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Arcadia Lynch chapter 1 . 12/21/2005
This is good for your first piece of flash fiction. It's shor and has a ver creepy vibe to it. I think you're right, it would lose som of its luster if it were long.
jasilcock chapter 1 . 10/23/2005
That's really very good, I like the twist at the end. It would be good as a longer story as well but, like you said, it might lose some of the effect.

Well done.
mooseyx3 chapter 1 . 8/12/2005
That was good. Short, sweet, and simple. Very well written.

*peace*
Fayth Bounarotti chapter 1 . 8/23/2003
wow i loved it. by the two insane boys with guns were u talking about the boys of colimbine? if so i would reconment watching bowling for colimbine it shows a side to guns the government keeps hiding
Lissa chapter 1 . 6/13/2003
not bad
Marche De La Lupe chapter 1 . 4/30/2003
dude that was freakishly good!
melisande chapter 1 . 8/22/2002
ooh that was really good, a bit freaky in a way, but good
amdespot chapter 1 . 6/6/2002
I really liked this, it was nice and simple and different.
hmm.hmm.nope I forgot chapter 1 . 3/9/2002
thz stori yummy. yummy yummy yummy. feeds meeee, yum yums
Mirai ChiChi chapter 1 . 11/29/2000
It's so sad, I love it. I love stories like this.
feedmeseymour chapter 1 . 11/4/2000
insane asylum! heh heh
Kalen chapter 1 . 8/15/2000
Disturbing, most definitely. But you wrote very well.
Colin chapter 1 . 8/12/2000
Wow. Disturbing but good. I liked it.
Flare chapter 1 . 8/6/2000
dang. that was good. bf die. girl goes nuts. nobody lives happily ever after. Perfect story.
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