Reviews for I Forgot
Heirel chapter 1 . 5/28/2004
Pretty good.. only thing I really have to say is that it would've been alot more powerful if it didn't pull out as long as it did. Personally would'a ended it at
now it is too
late...
but that's just me. Otherwise it ain't bad.
Victoria Elizabeth chapter 1 . 8/11/2003
Tha twas a good poem especially for a first.
recalcitrant chapter 1 . 7/26/2003
i felt that u had a really well written poem here so i m reviewing to tell u that. i think u have the all the makings of a really good writer. please rr my stuff if u want. i suggest "hurt", "time" and "this one is called f* you." keep up the good writing because i would love to read more.

peace

recalcitrant
abstractthinker chapter 1 . 6/27/2003
Really nice! Especially the part where he gets married..but not to you. Wow, there's a tightness in my chest, lol. :o)
Spirit chapter 1 . 8/22/2000
Oh, that's so sad. That reminds me of the song I Love You by Sarah Mclachlan. Is that where you go the idea? I love that song and I love this poem!
Lucky chapter 1 . 8/21/2000
Cute,For being it your first poem!Good job.
SilentWitness chapter 1 . 8/20/2000
Hey that's great! I like your style of writing. This monologue is very good because it reveals a lot of emotion.
Katie chapter 1 . 8/20/2000
MORE WRITE MORE!