why, roxy... you've got some major talent, girlie... send it. (ya know what I'm talking about)

luv Zoe

Aww this was touching, nice song

Whoa! This is a really good song. You obviously have a talent. Is it for a special someone? If you ever wanna chat, my email's above.

That was very good. I really liked it...keep writing songs...you have a great talent

I like it...the only problem is that you say "I wish I didn't have to choose/my best bud or you/cuz if you choose him/i can never have you/and if i choose you/i'll hurt him/i choose option two" well option two is hurting him so that doesn't work...otherwise great job!