|Reviews for After Dark|
| A Pitiful American Mouse chapter 1 . 11/21/2002
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| Seizure Squirrel chapter 1 . 6/6/2002
Interesting, I like how they all kind of link together. You should write more.
| Robs chapter 1 . 4/14/2002
Good idea to have a number of short stories intertwined with eachother. I liked it. Your only problems that I saw were regular mistakes like grammar, word tense, and usage. All in all, it was very good. I would really like it if you would write another one with the same characters in the same writing style. You could turn it into a series of these building up to a climax when all the characters come face to face somehow, or some other tie in that produces an official ending to them. Good job!
| Strider Hunter chapter 1 . 3/14/2002
This was a good read. I like reading original short stories that are actually GOOD, with all the crap on this website notwithstanding. I was impressed by how the first and last stories tied everything together, all the events happening in a single night, I presume. A suggestion, spacing the dialogue would help make a smoother read; also I noticed a few typos here and there. All in all, a good effort.
| Hazel Bite chapter 1 . 2/24/2002
I liked it :-) I liked how everything was tied together.
| Darksquall NSI chapter 1 . 2/23/2002
Wow... I liked it. Pretty dark. Cool