Reviews for Ai No Yume
Quae chapter 1 . 11/4/2003
Very, very good. Beautiful flow and innovative thoughts. I especially like the line about the cranes.
harvey-potter chapter 1 . 11/4/2002
Oh my God. That was incredible. I like the way you structured the lines, and the effective use of broken or incomplete sentences. That adds to the entire meaning of the poem. I also can appreciate the subject. In this dislexic world, evil prewvails, not good, and sometimes its difficult to understand which team your playing for, and furthermore, who you really are. Well done. *APPLAUDS*
Trey Harvey chapter 1 . 2/27/2002
I liked it, it took some *gasp* actual concentration to read it. A window into the mind of a 17 year old girl, The horror ! the horror! no really it was a good poem, its no digimon *wink* , but its still really good! keep up the good work, write more poetry!