Reviews for Freedom Abounds
Mistress Jakira chapter 1 . 5/18/2002
This is brilliant! It flows well, and the rhyme scheme changes unexpectedly at several points, making for an interesting read that keeps you thinking. The theme...I mean, wow. I've always been interested in things like the civil rights movement-and promoting the fact that ALL people are equal. Learning about slavery always just boiled rage inside of me. So, naturally, this poem made me really happy! _

Style points: I loved how you ended it with the simple phrase. I can't pick out a favorite part like I usually do here, but I'd say the whole thing was excellent, flowed like water even while it changed often, and is just overall one of the best poems I've read. _ I'll definitely keep note of this one. Marvelous work, keep writing! ~MJ
jab chapter 1 . 3/3/2002
i like how you write about various subjects...

makes each one unique

this poem in particular has a very nice flow :)