Reviews for Broken Bubbles
Alchemist 3xx3 chapter 1 . 3/26/2005
I really adore the line "cut free my achors to this world." Nicely done.
sproxx chapter 1 . 8/10/2003
You don't need to get rid of stanza 2 or 3. they both really add to the poem as a whole.
Gareth chapter 1 . 5/4/2002
wow, ure so gd. i duobt me sayin wot verses to keep etc will b of ne use to u now but mebbe keep all of them? if not delete the second verse. rn't the falmers funny:)
Sweet'n'Sour chapter 1 . 4/29/2002
I really like that. ummm... i dont think you should change anything about it. i even like the title. Absolutely lovely please write more! ~Hayley
Clinkerbell chapter 1 . 4/28/2002
So pretty! I like. )
Gladia chapter 1 . 4/11/2002
Cool poem! [Thanks 4 reviewing my list!]
MmmMmmGood chapter 1 . 3/21/2002 is a lot different from your *whoo hoo* super funny lists. i like it. personally, i wouldn't take away a verse. methinks that you should leave well enough alone. DASISTMEINEFUSS? NO! nevaire!

poor lil rainbowterrorist.
DasIstMeineFuss chapter 1 . 3/20/2002
wow that was good... i liked it...
Return of Yagami Iori chapter 1 . 3/12/2002
Wow. This is beautiful. If you want to cut a stanza, cut the second. I really like the third one. I take anti-depressants _
browneyedguy chapter 1 . 3/11/2002
well for those out there that feel that life is no longer worth liveing i feel deeply sorry for. evry 1 is entitled to how they live there life and when they want to end it but its just sad that very few care enough to help or do anything for these people.

this is a touching poem very well wrote and made me think
Le Chat de la Lune chapter 1 . 3/3/2002
Sadly beautiful...
Lemie chapter 1 . 2/28/2002
woah, now jammie that is bloody brilliant. I don't think u need to cut any of it, but if you must, make it the second verse. But I love it all. xxx
Seran Perry chapter 1 . 2/28/2002
*crying* That was excellent! Keep writing dude...ette! Don't ask... The right to die forever and may the Force be with you
AllanaD chapter 1 . 2/28/2002
Wow, that's quite good. I haven't been on this website before but I know Aimz the nemesis a.k.a. the sadistic scorpion or whatever she calls herself nowadays! That's quite good, can I put it in my poem book? AllanaD. 8-
AimzNemesis Sadistic Scorpion chapter 1 . 2/26/2002
I think that this is very good! Much better than something I could've done - I mean, the best poem I've written isn't even original poetry, its a Silent Hill poem! But this is still very nice indeedy. )
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