Reviews for A New Day
karina chapter 1 . 8/3/2002
your emotion is lacking. its like you're writing the poem just to write it. stick to expressing yourself. you have so much more feeling in your writing when you do it like that.
Malou chapter 1 . 5/9/2002
I loved it, but I already told you that. N you can be cheerful (somewhat), you're not always morbid! lol. You already know how I felt about this poem, but I thought I'd tell you again that I really, really liked love!
Jess chapter 1 . 4/8/2002
Good stuff Erwin, it doesn't really seem like a topic you would focus on, but it's well written none the less.
erica chapter 1 . 3/5/2002
see? I told you writing something uplifting and happy would make you feel better! And its STILL really good even though its not all morbid. k later. ~erica
faiz chapter 1 . 2/25/2002
hey...good stuff it's actually happy! woo! no but it's really good, high five