Reviews for Jack and Jill
josh chapter 3 . 6/18
boromire must be destroyed
Badkittykitty chapter 1 . 6/15
What a haunting story. It truly caught my attention at the very beginning. I don't say this much, but im certainly impressed.
ViciousCerberus666 chapter 3 . 5/19
That was good.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/21/2015
oh...Jack and Jill...*sighs sweetly*
Ninjablue245 chapter 3 . 5/10/2015
Awesome story but really sad
Up chapter 3 . 12/13/2014
Have you rewritten this? some people have commented from chapter 9?
Up chapter 3 . 12/13/2014
Surely-this is not the end? Please continue
Swagalicious chapter 3 . 6/26/2014
Are there more chapters! That was so good, I totally wanna read the rest! I feel for Jill and I wonder what jack has been thinking about! Is he the bad guy?!
apples chapter 3 . 11/6/2012
Oh, this is such a good story! I want to know how it ends! It sucks you abandoned it.
ciella chapter 3 . 1/5/2012
beautifully written, I can't wait for the next chapter!
Marjulie chapter 9 . 12/17/2011
Wow. Grimm Brothers, anyone? Even though I know it was going to end badly, I still hoped they'd have a happy ending. Oh, well.
Jiaqui chapter 9 . 12/16/2011
(On a roll XD please pardon the pun)

That made so much since! My childhood feels like a missing puzzle piece has been found. And it was beautifully written. And easily relate-able and understandable...well, not completely relate-able, poor Jill, but I can see why she would do those things. A perfect tragedy...

Again, I applaud you greatly and move on to your next piece!
Ceri Anne chapter 9 . 11/7/2011
Oh, this was so sad! I was convinced they were going to find a way to be together! Still, it was such a good story. I'll never be able to hear the nursery rhyme again without thinking of this.
cathuman chapter 9 . 11/5/2011
3. Oh so much love for this story. You had me bawling by the end.
Catherynne Cleenteethe chapter 9 . 10/9/2011
I've read this whole story, and I must say: I love it. Seriously, you've got to be a Grimm Brother in disguise or something. This was awesome. Things like this make my day. You are soooo in my favorites list.
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