Status: here sixteen years late, hooked on the first 3 chapters and browsing reviews to figure out what happened because I’m dying to know!

boromire must be destroyed

What a haunting story. It truly caught my attention at the very beginning. I don't say this much, but im certainly impressed.

That was good.

oh...Jack and Jill...*sighs sweetly*

Awesome story but really sad

Have you rewritten this? some people have commented from chapter 9?

Surely-this is not the end? Please continue

Are there more chapters! That was so good, I totally wanna read the rest! I feel for Jill and I wonder what jack has been thinking about! Is he the bad guy?!

Oh, this is such a good story! I want to know how it ends! It sucks you abandoned it.

beautifully written, I can't wait for the next chapter!

Wow. Grimm Brothers, anyone? Even though I know it was going to end badly, I still hoped they'd have a happy ending. Oh, well.

(On a roll XD please pardon the pun)

That made so much since! My childhood feels like a missing puzzle piece has been found. And it was beautifully written. And easily relate-able and understandable...well, not completely relate-able, poor Jill, but I can see why she would do those things. A perfect tragedy...

Again, I applaud you greatly and move on to your next piece!

Oh, this was so sad! I was convinced they were going to find a way to be together! Still, it was such a good story. I'll never be able to hear the nursery rhyme again without thinking of this.

3. Oh so much love for this story. You had me bawling by the end.