Reviews for Jack and Jill
Beltane chapter 2 . 5/13/2002
That was powerful. Very emotional. yOU do a great job at describing her feelings. must read more...
this would be a sarah chapter 9 . 5/2/2002
...Damn...
Snafu1 chapter 10 . 4/30/2002
WOW. That was incredible. I started reading it expecting it to be dull, basically I slightly detailed version of the rhyme, but... well, wow...
Kimberly Michelle chapter 9 . 4/22/2002
WOW! That was great! It really and truly was. I loved the begining, the middle, the ending... every part! I'm almost in tears! What a great story!
Alexiana chapter 9 . 4/19/2002
OMG. I've have never read a story like this ever. At first I didn't want to read it because it wasn't only dark but twisted. But, I got strangely hooked real fast and I just wanted to let you know that even though I loved the story and have to admit it's one of the best ones I've read... I wanted to congratulate you on your writing style. Your writing is so smooth and flowing and not many people possess the talent that you do. 'Good Job' for the story and your skills.
R.A. Sears chapter 9 . 4/5/2002
Wow... What a wicked ending! DUDE! Honestly, I wasn't even thinking about the actual rhyme until the end. Sad, sad, sad, indeed. Totally twisted, and very intriguing. I loved it! So beautiful, so dark and dreadful... a truly wonderful piece of literature. I'm going to have to go read the other fairy tales, now... You've made an addict out of me!
R.A. Sears chapter 8 . 4/5/2002
Ack! How can there only be one more chapter? I have a feeling this story isn't going to have a happy ending...
R.A. Sears chapter 7 . 4/5/2002
Yes! I knew that was what she was going to ask him! Kill the bastard, yes! Sorry... Guess I'm getting into the story, eh?
R.A. Sears chapter 6 . 4/5/2002
Dun dun dun! The plot thickens...
R.A. Sears chapter 5 . 4/5/2002
Sweet Jesus... I think I'm going to cry... This is a very emotional piece...
songmaster chapter 9 . 4/5/2002
Man, that story wuz da bomb! I also read "Window Panes of Sugar" and I like the way you added the horror/supernatural/dark romance twist to it. What got me interested in your stories was the dark retelling of "Snow White" in a movie starring Sigourney Weaver. I'm tellin' you, you could get these stories published for real. They're that good. I was kept on the edge of my seat the entire time! I'm gonna start posting some horror stories of my own soon; you've enspired me! Keep writing! Good luck!
R.A. Sears chapter 4 . 4/5/2002
Nice. I liked the exchange between Jack and Jill. Very well written.
R.A. Sears chapter 3 . 4/5/2002
Hmmmm...
R.A. Sears chapter 2 . 4/5/2002
Damn... talk about sad... Very emotional and descriptive.
R.A. Sears chapter 1 . 4/5/2002
I love it! Absolutely beautiful! Dark, angst-ridden... this seems like it's going to be a very deep story... Kudos to you for coming up with such an idea!
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