Reviews for elves
lael1bologna chapter 1 . 3/28/2009
I can hear the stars crying out that this is a really good haiku! Nice work!
Erlkoenigin chapter 1 . 9/4/2008
I can hear them and the melody of the stars
Morwain chapter 1 . 5/3/2006
that was really pretty too I like
Aquafied chapter 1 . 4/30/2006

i love how you can capture something so amazing, in such a short clip

harder to do than longer poetry.

(the word war isnt quite as poetic, you knoww.)
elvenstorm chapter 1 . 12/11/2003
Lol so simple yet brilliant :) I love its lightness well done!
aleppine chapter 1 . 11/14/2003
This is so beautiful ... in a tiny handful of words.


*scuttles away*
frugale chapter 1 . 11/14/2003
Awesome! I don't think you need any constructive criticism, so I'll just sceram out loud your work is good.
Eralk Fang chapter 1 . 11/9/2003
Wow. To pack so much in so little words is always amazing to me.
Emi Amara chapter 1 . 11/8/2003
oh, this is so pretty! well done! elves are cool! nice poem

cya )

-winged girl
agny chapter 1 . 11/8/2003
EarendilBeloved Star chapter 1 . 7/1/2003

It simple,. but descriptive! I love it! It's wonderful. :)

Keep writing.

-maybe if chance comes you could check out a few of my poems/stories.

If you'd like.
Lounalune chapter 1 . 6/25/2003
Simply beautiful. Your haikus are so striking...
StarWolf chapter 1 . 6/24/2003
Short but sweet, if I may use the clich├ęd phrase. ; Keep writing!

Angelfire2 chapter 1 . 5/21/2003
I really like this one. I can imagine them dancing around the campfire and singing to the stars...i'm sorry, i'm in a weird mood today. *Dont mind me.* Besides, i love elves too...everybody says i look like one!
just like me chapter 1 . 5/7/2003
I'm so jelous of good you can write!
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