OOH. Good story, bad ending. I love Cinderella and I like the Ugly Duckling. As I said this is a great story. I just wish you hadn't ended it that way. Still, I guess that in the real world there never is a real happily ever after.

Where in cinderella doe sit happen that prince charming dies? and although she was a meantal shut-in, i do not rember cinderella having suicidal tendecies. Where you in a morbid mood when you wrote the end of the fic- cos it was not onlty depressing, it was totally weird, and ill-fitting. Badly done.

omg.. so sad.. why did you make it sooo sad? atleast Cinderella had a happy ending! anyway it's good.. short but good...

Please continue. I like... I really like. What happens next? I quess I'll just have to wait. Please write again soon. Don't make me wait to long, but of course I will, because I just love this.