|Reviews for The Tale Of Balder,The Brave|
| Fiore Chnudth chapter 1 . 8/18/2006
I always like anything with vikings. I am a northman afterall.
I would suggest though that you divided it into sections to improve the flow.
And maybe you could change "many heroic deeds" to "many a heroic deed" to make it rhyme better.
But all in all, I thought it okay. :-)
| this story is crap chapter 1 . 3/29/2005
Balder was not a warrior and nor did he ride a winged horse that was named Aragorn! There are no horses in the Norse Mythology named Aragorn, Andrew! Why don't you pick up a Norse Mythological book and read it then you would find that the only horses that had wings or were had the possiblity of having wings were the mounts of the Valkryies!This poem is not at all truthful to the legend of Balder the Brave, the noblest of all again, Andrew, for this poem sucks.
| lala chapter 1 . 4/22/2003
Balder wasn't a warrior. He was 'innocence'. You might be thinking of Frey.