That is really sweet.

Hats off to u, I can't write poetry like that!

G*B

Ohhhh...I really liked that one. That was a wonderful poem. It flowed nicely, no real stops or any stumbling over places where you should stop and take a breath...if you understood that. It was very sweet. Again, rhyming is very well written.

The beginning of this poem just sucks the reader in, making them want to continue on and the closing at the end of the poem was very nice. i really liked that.

I like how you stated that a flower is merely petals and long stem...very true, heh. Wonderful job! You have lots of talent.

Girl! That is a really good poem! How do you come up with stuff like that? . I also tend to do that sometimes.

But hey, if there's no better way

I'll keep pickin them day after day!

lol!

Sweet! I used to do the same thing...

peace/love

That's good. I like that poem becuase it really makes sense and, I don't know if you would call it taht, but it seems to be ironic or something at the end... I don't know, I just like the ending where the narrator goes back to picking the flower petals. It's a really neat poem anyhow.

This was cute. I really enjoyed reading it.

this is nice.