Reviews for Despair
d7-Poet chapter 1 . 1/26/2003
The making stuff rhyme took away from the poem which was still amazing so I can only wonder what it would be like in it's perfect form! I love dragons too and it's on the top of my 'to-do' list to meet one before I die!
star65 chapter 1 . 8/30/2002
Very good rhyming sequence. I liked the symbolism, although I took offense to dragon slaying. I have a deep obsession with dragons. ;o) Anyway, a very interesting poem.
Mockingbird Silenced chapter 1 . 10/8/2000
Dark. I like dark stuff. _~
bunny chan chapter 1 . 9/21/2000
nice poem! totally nice!
A. Ushio chapter 1 . 8/24/2000
Shallow narrative style. Alternating colors are disconcerting to the reader.