Reviews for For My Maiden
Dragonmount chapter 19 . 10/10/2005
*tear* So beautiful. The ending is sad, very sad. I need tissue!
Maho.Shojo chapter 5 . 8/15/2005
O! Sleeping with demons...

These are awful nice Demons! haha, this story is kinda cool, mixing japanese culture with like... north american influences and stuff..

Well, it makes an interesting read, that's for sure!

Maho.Shojo chapter 1 . 8/15/2005
cool! haha, this isn't as bad as you make it out to be! Have more confidence in yourself and your writing! I for one, think it's good.
Magenta Luna chapter 1 . 10/2/2004
i like it...
SierraKnight chapter 20 . 9/1/2004
I'm so glad that you're back! *runs to read the sequal*
B.T. Lines chapter 20 . 5/16/2004
This is such a wonderful story! I absolutly loved it!
Ima Made Nando Mo chapter 20 . 5/15/2004
_! I will be looking foward to the sequal.. and maybe a prequal. OMG YOU ROCK! _ And I wanna be emailed of chapter updates! ! _ yay!
atrocious puppet chapter 9 . 5/14/2004
I like your story so much! I'm just starting to read it though. Maybe I'll review again at the end. I just wanted to ask if you had any drawings of your character? I hope you do. Or if not, I would love to try and draw some of your characters. If that's alright...Please, I hope that you could e-mail me about the drawings if it isn't too much to ask.-()
DevonnyAuriel chapter 20 . 5/13/2004
Omg, it's not crazy, it's good! I love this story~! A sequel would be awesome, where like, Ryne kno...not dead. lol.
Ri of OnYGiRRi chapter 19 . 5/12/2004
WAI! This is so…so…so…BEAUTIFUL! I mean—really! I could care less if my eyes hurt from all the reading, the phone bill getting higher (and the electric bill too, I guess), and if my mom is currently screeching bloody murder telling me to ‘TURN THAT WRETCHED COMPUTER OFF!’ …wait, actually, I do care about my mom screaming bloody murder, but still! WAI! I can’t believe it’s OVER! And I wasn’t there to watch it progress! (Uh…the story…) …I’m so-so-so-so-so in love! WAH! It’s such a BEAUTIFUL STORY! *sniffle* How did you get to write something like this? It’s so KAWAII! …no! Let me speak more! …
Um…it’s really cute…really, really.
So, erm, how about the sequel, ne?
Slashzilla chapter 19 . 5/1/2004
OHMIGOD! I'm sitting here crying while I write this reveiw. I started crying at the beginning of the chap, and couldn't stop. Gah...
This story is the best I've ever write a sequel! I can't stand for Sai to be sad for too long!
GirlMaverick chapter 19 . 4/18/2004
Ok. I know I should have reveiwed this when I first read it, which was months ago, so I appologise. But PLEASE write that sequal you were talking about! PLEASE! I LOVE this story, and waiting is just driving me INSANE!
The Liddo 1 chapter 19 . 12/26/2003
this story was very lemme find the rite i should say it was exquisite .
Malfunctioned chapter 1 . 11/25/2003
Ow ... wow... I'm at a loss for words. Jeezie. - You're story was positively WONDERFUL! I hope you do a conitnuation. I could think of all types of ideas - ! Of course, it is your story, though.
Exorcist chapter 1 . 11/11/2003
My goodness! You insult my judgement when you say that you are a "sucky" author! First, I am proud to say that I found not one grammar or spelling mistake in the whole first chapter! (I have only read the first chapter so far, but I certainly plan on continuing.) That's quite an accomplishment, and it's a rare one too, coming from me. ;) Then, you managed to keep my attention through the chapter. And you are a wonderful writer! The plot seems nice, but not totally unreal, the words flow, the main character, Ryne, isn't cheesy or Mary-Sue-ish. She seems like a real person. So great job, and I'll review again when I get past the other chapters. Toodles!

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