Reviews for Red and White and Blue
Chiinoyami-chan chapter 1 . 10/27/2003
Very, very true...
Heather Goldbug chapter 1 . 5/12/2002
Yeahhhh... I know what you're talking about! Parents are doing their best, no? So are thei kids, right? Well, I am... but nothing I do is ever good enough. That's why I've got friends... I breathe their support to keep me alive... the poem was all right but the rhyming was a little weird. It seemed a little forced, maybe you want to work on your rhyming or start writing free-verse. Whatever you cohose to do I think you can go far if you keep improving..
Suzanne Star chapter 1 . 3/23/2002
hudsiyfiusnfsudi chapter 1 . 3/15/2002
wow, very good poem. I like it a lot.
sinister velvet chapter 1 . 3/8/2002
scarrs, annoying little buggers...
empty account chapter 1 . 3/5/2002
Very Powerful, not what I expected at all.