Okay, question: Why are there weird symbols and stuff all the way through your story? I'd just like an explanation if you could post it in a chapter or something.

You have a gift with writing. All your stories are hilarious, and your college is really paying off. It took me two very late nights to read Marriage of Convience and it was worth the sleep loss. You are an amazing author and keep the stories coming.

i loved it. it even made me cry. but i feel bad for david, what happens to him? itd be really funny if he got with Cami. lol keep up the goodyness.

When you got to the bit aobut the truck, it started to sound very forced and very thin. It continued like that for the rest of the story. It woudl be a good sotyr if the plot imporved alittle. In this the guy did all the chasing. The ending was okay when the sister screamed but the the last line just didn't finish it quite that well. Some nice bits in it.

The story was beautiful. Loved it to bits.

this story was awesome.. i really liked to be david's and marshall's g-friend...lol...great idea on that...i really adored the story.. my eyes hurts now cause it is late and i am still reading...so,...good night...good story...

Loved this story so much i couldn't go off the net until i finsihed. You are a very talented writer. And i adored the way you directly made the reader the main character, quite original.

Cute story! I love happy endings! : )

Wow...this is really, really good. I can't even begin to describe. This story totally takes you to another world, and few writers can really achieve that. It's so captivating that I finished all of it in one sitting, as long as it was! I think that you should leave this story alone and not do a sequel - it's the kind of story that's better without one. Get this published!

Awesome story, loved the whole (YNH) bit.

OMG! You're from Montana! I'm so happy! I'm a Montanan, too. So, are you talking about MSU Billings or MSU Bozeman? Well, I like the first chapter, and I'm hooked, so keep up the good work!
~Detrianelle

That was a cute story... And very unique with (YNH). Nice job!

thats nice she deserved a break w/ a guy that didn't desert her every time they kissed lol

i like how u put YNH in the story cause i so want marshall

Ok this story is freaking me out. The girl in chapter six, in the algebra class has my name! Spelt the exact same way! This is creppy! I think ANYBODY, spelt it that way. is the name in the story pronounced LUH-re (lauren) or LORE-en? mine's the first one.