Reviews for Hold On
Smiley-Bear chapter 1 . 2/17/2003
Beautiful! The Lord has Blessed you with a fine gift and it shows. Keep writing!
UniqueDork chapter 1 . 2/17/2003
AWESOME! I love it and im printing it out. God is good.
PseudoBohemian chapter 1 . 2/17/2003
Nice poem, you've kept the traditional rhyming scheme without making it disgustingly cliched!

Beautiful message too. I prayed all the way through my gym

~Pseudo
Leslie chapter 1 . 4/30/2002
that was really good you should be a poet!
Lauren chapter 1 . 4/26/2002
wow, very deep...very good...i am very glad that someone has the guts to write about God..
Mariana chapter 1 . 4/1/2002
YAY! That's good, awesome, super, great, etc, etc. um... i wish i could write poems like that...*sniffles* oh well! u deserve an applase, no three applauses! *applause**applause**applause*
Tara chapter 1 . 3/26/2002
good soul *sniff, sniff, sobbing*
Abs chapter 1 . 3/7/2002
This poem's great... its very inspirational and is totally telling us about what is to come and what we should expect.. great job gurl