|Reviews for The Unleashing of Tethyre Chapter 1 & 2|
| snowflake831 chapter 1 . 6/12/2005
Excellent! 10/10 if you rather be rated in one thing though, you mispelled "deserve" 5 times and watch your punctuation. Other than that, I'd certainly hope for you that it does one day get published, you sure have the potential to do so.
| An Inside Joke chapter 1 . 8/24/2003
This reminds me a lot of Tamora Pierce- do you read her books? It might be helpful if you could decribe foxyns earlier on in the story- maybe before she's attacked.
| no name5 chapter 1 . 6/2/2001
i don't get it well i do but i don't well i am stupid i don't even no what i am typing it was good write more
| Tracey chapter 1 . 12/31/2000
HEY! Not bad, I liked it! Too bad Prince Brylin wasn't Heero tho or Reena Relena, huh? then we could ahve a sweet- ss Gundam story here! Keep it up, I can't wait for the next part!
| Veej chapter 1 . 10/2/2000
Wouldn't it be cool to have the powers of sorcery at hand? You wouldn't believe HOW much I would take advantage of that power! The way the Foxyns were destroyed was wicked!
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/30/2000
_ Very Good. There is one problem though, you need to get on chapter 3! lol I'm kidding, nothing bad about this story. Good work!
| Lys chapter 1 . 8/27/2000
I have read this, but good! Hey, can i be in this one too?...
| Ice Wolf17 chapter 1 . 8/27/2000
Awesome! You wrote a good story! But can you R & R mine Please? Thanks! I like your story! Quite original!