Reviews for Death Ray
All Mighty Terrestrial chapter 1 . 2/6/2003
Nope, not too depressing. Kind of a combination of Dr. Strangelove and Prelude to a Kiss. Or at least, that's the two things it reminded me of. (sigh) I watch too much TV, as shown by the fact that I might remember that cartoon. Was it one of the Duck Dodgers of the 22 and 1/2 Century with Marvin the Martian?
undecided bunny chapter 1 . 3/27/2002
Nope, it wasn't too depressing; you were just putting some honest questions on the table. I have to say that the first stanza was a little amateur, but the rest was pretty good. This subject, too, is one that I think about kind of often.. maybe i just have too much time on my hands! or maybe we're clones! lol... okay i'll shut up. _ -haley
valpincon chapter 1 . 3/10/2002
blimey! i came here to write polite review in exchange for review (thank you btw! i live on feedback!) and i find really bloody brilliant poetry! cliche my arse! this is amazing - esp the last stanza, very depressing without being all dark and disturbing - just melancholy. lovely. well done!