oh!...

that was a wonderful fic. i really mean it. angel is one of the greates character i've read about. lol. i don't really know what he looks like, but he ACTS really cute. )

please write more!

And this is why I read people's fave. stories list- you never know when you might strike gold. Like this little gem of supirior writeing- a simple, bright plot, flawless character develpoment, and a shimmering luster of detail and imagery. Ladies and gentlemen, this perfect, priceless diamond is free-for-all! And personally, I think that's what it is. Definately on my favorites, not the least of reasons is that I need to read the next chapter when it comes out.

~Alana

oh, *please* continue this!

I thought that this story was hysterical. I can't wait to find out more about Angel. Why can't he talk?

love the fic ... please update soon!

Aw, please, please write more, this is so cute. *grins hopefully* More? Please? Soon?

Please update! I've been reading and rereading this story forever i just never reviewed, but this is so flippn' good please update I've waited forever I'm begging you please!

o dear. well first of all, i'd like to say, i'm in love with your fic.

truely, truely, love it. I love Angel, (though i've wondered throughout the whole thing, doesnt he have a real name?) and i absolutely adore Lori. me and him could really get along. . . shit we're exactly the same.

secondly, i'd like to day that you haven't updated since. . . (stares at last posted date). . . a day after my last birthday. ironic.

IF THERES A GOD (and i know there isnt. . . no offense to those catholics and christians and whatnot. . .) THEN YOU'LL UPDATE. IF YOU DONT LIKE FICTION PRESS (i hate it, personaly. . .) than e-mail me! ! ! ! PLEASE! ! ! e-mail address is in my so-called "bio". . .

I quite like the way this story is going. Quite a crazy summary to say the least, and I thought what the heck. Its written better than I thought it would be.

Is Lori a total goth? He seems quite up beat for the persona he tries to carry. I wonder what your going to do with that. Interesting plot, interesting characters too :)

I'd really love to see where this story goes. Don't rush it either take time and write a brilliant story :p

woo... nice... yaoi.. *grins* i like... more!

Whenever you post another chapter, if it isn't too much trouble, could you please e-mail me and let me know? I would greatly appreciate it. Thanks.

mmmmmmm post! post post post! UPDATE! this and damaged angels too! theyre both soo super good! u r an AMAZING writer! really really good stories!

whee... nice story... shd continue... pls? ;p. it's a reaaaaalliii good story.

OMG! That was so good! I can't wait for you to update. Keep up the great work!

Great story.. can't wait for the other chapters!