Reviews for Lucretia's Last Request
xxx1000 chapter 1 . 3/3/2014
Nice final words.
Derek Dogan chapter 6 . 2/18/2005
The images you inspire through a few words- "Mining the sun". It's a sweet and awesome thought.
Derek Dogan chapter 5 . 9/24/2004
Chapter 5 is good stuff. Significantly longer than the other chapters, so far- please continue!
Alex chapter 5 . 8/23/2004
I can't believe this got updated! This is the best chapter yet. I'm curious as to how the first bit ties in with the rest of the story. Keep it up; this is really getting good.
Derek Dogan chapter 4 . 4/20/2004
I can't believe this one has so few reviews. Interesting and quite intriguing; I'd really like to see what all this is leading up to. Lexx rocks!
Ragine chapter 3 . 10/30/2003
While His Divine Shadow's style remains pithy, his thoughts imaginative, and the names of his characters ironically fitting, the reader is left wondering about the link between some of the events. For instance, while " Lucrecia's last request " stands well on its own, with a thundering O'Henryish surprise, we wonder how it is related to the remainder of the story. We would also like to know what Scarlett is doing, making friends with the neighbours instead of keeping her nose to the grind.
Ragine chapter 2 . 10/30/2003
His Divine Shadow leads us toward a celestial world of the future in a rich, succinct style. The reader awaits, with anticipation, the development of his third chapter.