|Reviews for The Broken Heart|
| solitary child chapter 1 . 3/29/2002
I can relate to this 100%..well, maybe not 100%. But basically the whole way..
| undecided bunny chapter 1 . 3/27/2002
Me, me! I can relate! *lol* well I've had my heart broken a coupla times, yes.. but I think most people have. Anyway, I like the imagery in this one, it's really great (the whole gate of broken glass thing) but really the last stanza is the best, because it's so true. :) -haley
| Zemmiphobic chapter 1 . 3/10/2002
i can totally relate and i defintly agree. although a broken heart still sucks for a while-but you learn from it and realize they weren't worth your time anyway-this is really good
| Rtwoare2 chapter 1 . 3/9/2002
Looks like you found a relation! Yeah i know what you are feeling. Most of mine...actually all of mine are about what this poem is about. Check em' out, its strangley odd.
| Impressionist chapter 1 . 3/8/2002
hmm... a little too sugary for my taste, but overall, it was a good poem. nice layout, and your rhyming scheme works well. keep it up. I'll have a look at some of your other stuff.