Reviews for Syllabic Poetry
bipedalcooney chapter 8 . 11/3/2006
Beautiful imagry, I love the picture you've made here.
bipedalcooney chapter 5 . 11/3/2006
I really like this, especially how the first and last lines are only one word. Well done.
Ygg chapter 10 . 8/3/2005
Wow the imagery is just stunning! Extraordinary haiku!
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 10 . 8/2/2005
Unique imagery and strong portrayal of emotions.
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 9 . 8/2/2005
I like the chilling theme in these and the stillness that comes with the cold.
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 8 . 8/2/2005
A reverence towards animals and their strength.
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 7 . 8/2/2005
The last line was humorous and matter-of-fact - nature is wondrous.
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 6 . 8/2/2005
I love that image of "fiery leaves" Very fierce and passionate.
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 5 . 8/2/2005
I feel the wind in my face in this one.
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 4 . 8/2/2005
Quite nice. I like the symbolism.
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 3 . 8/2/2005
Yes, indeed.
Summer Walters chapter 8 . 2/3/2005
This one not so much creates a visual image but an abstract idea, struggle. Very nice.
Summer Walters chapter 7 . 2/3/2005
I really like the word choices (e.g. sun glints, sharp fangs, ice beast) and how they complement each other. The whole haiku just just sounds really nice.
Ellerfru chapter 4 . 5/19/2002
Really good... I love how the first and last line only consist of one word.
Ellerfru chapter 3 . 5/19/2002
Beautiful... You're a really good haiku writer. You know, haiku is my favorite genre. Please write more!
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