Reviews for Descent
youzi chapter 1 . 3/16/2005
I love this piece, especially the lines "After death, your body disappears slowly,But your soul rises up"...it's a refreshing way to symbolize life, and the tone of the poem is poignant without being at all pretentious D
Amaya Windsong chapter 1 . 10/31/2004
very cool! i never thought of comparing the two like this! kudos for a great idea and an even greater poem!
rikku
DHABUZ chapter 1 . 10/31/2004
nice poem...well written
Quixotic Coyote chapter 1 . 10/14/2003
it's always nice to see an interesting view of life, especially when done so well. i loved it! :)
hm chapter 1 . 9/3/2000
Hmmm...very interesting...I never thought of life that way...)