That was an amazing story. I loved every aspect of it. The summary, the characters, the twist, and the (somewhat?) graphic description of the witch's death. I even loved the end when [SPOILER ALERT] Hansel and Gretel killed the stepmother. She was a b*tch, so she deserved it. All in all, I'd give this story an 11/10.

Sounds very enticing! Will continue to R&R!

Great work! Loved reading it :)

Oh. My. God. -

amazing! 0-0

O M G that was super-duper FIRETRUCKING AWESOME ! ! ! ! I've never read the original Hansel & Gretel story but I thought that your remake was really reaally yummy ! ! ! *:.｡. o()o .｡.:*

Read in a day, huh? Sweet w

Hansel and Gretel used to be my favorite! This was...amazing. It seemed shorter, but still just as filling. I like how Gretel gets a bit sadistic at the end with the cleaver. And the twist of them not really being blood related.

Off to your next story!

I never really liked the original Hansel and Gretel, but THIS, I love. Although I did read most of it after midnight.

Oh my gosh. Just wow.

Now I knew when I started to read this, I had got into something that would probably scar me for life. Hansel and Gretel is a scary story after all. But you really give a new definition to frightening.

I swear that I almost jumped out of my skin when Gretel found her Dad’s head in the oven. To make it worse, I finished reading it at half three in the morning! I was so scared I could hardly move!

But I loved everything else in the story. The beautiful description. The characters of Hansel and Gretel. I liked the Dad too. I sort of felt sorry for him when Fiona was manipulating him. She was horrible.

I wonder if you know the original version of Hansel and Gretel. It doesn’t involve an oven, but a sawhorse which slices people up, which in my mind is even more frightening. Gretel claimed she didn’t know how to get onto the horse so the witch demonstrated, which is obviously similar to the popular version. You might have already known this, but if you didn’t, there you are. c:

I liked the twist with the sugar pane window death. Death by sugar pane window! Haha! I amuse myself. It was kind of horrible, but I sort of enjoyed it. As terrible as it sounds, I kind of wanted the witch to have a painful death. Hehe.

Well, thank you for writing this, even if it has left me mentally scarred for life.

Man! That step mother is a f! . I can't believe the father actually fell for her tricks! And now she wants to get rid of HIM next? D8 I feel for the fool. I really like Hansel's character, he's my favorite so far. Can't wait to see when the evil witch comes in. :3

Anyway, I really like so far! I ended up reading a lot of it in class cause I'm terrible like that lol. _;

Even though I should seriously finish your The Nutcracker Bleeds story first, I was too intrigued by this one and decided to have at it. XD

This beginning is definitely an attention grabber. 8D *sits back to enjoy the read* :3

Well, I have to say this is the best reinterpretation of a fairytale I have ever read. I had some suggestions but I've forgotten them... oh well, they must not have been very important. Not enough to put a damper on your marvelous story telling.

-Swan

That was a wicked story... I couldn't stop reading at all! Now it's done... It only made me want to read more of your stories... Good job!

Your opening is interesting... :) It entices me to read more!

B!tchin ending ;] I loved this story. I don't even think I've read the children's version but in this one Hansel was hot, lol.