Ho, cool! I'm writing a story about the end of the world, well actually it's about when the human race gets screwed over royally, but it's pretty close.

Very aweing (is that a word?) I like the part...The day we ceased to exist

I looked on in awe

As no one tried to resist...that is very sad

whoa, that was a bit intense, but it was very good. i'll review for others stories you wrote, i wanna check them out

it's a good poem and I really can relate, especially today when I feel so damn depressed.

the rhymes are very dramatic and the lines were simple, yet forceful.

and man, keep it up.

This is very powerful. Almost as if I could feel the cold.

very very good. it's we written too, which is a really good thing, most of my stuff turns out badly written ;) anyway, it has a lot of meaning to it, and it's very pretty.

that was what happens almost every night down south were i live, mabey you've seen it once or twice (postapocoliptic). Was it suppose to be popped or pooped. over all i thought it was cool and not as depressing as what i'm use to.

i thought this poem was written really well. but what excatly did you mean by minds try to kill?